Kia Ora, My name is Molly I am 10 years old and I am a year six girl at Marshland School. I have one younger sister and two older brothers. My favourite sport is Netball I love to play it in my spare time and I like to dance, I also like to play on my trampoline. My favourite dinner food is nachos and I like lasagna. I have two pets, my dog's name is Benson and my cat's name is Alvin. My favourite singer is Ed Sheeran. One of my learning goals is to represent and describe the results of reflection, rotation, and translation on shapes or patterns. My favourite subjects at school are Maths and Reading. I am good at Netball and Dance. I am very excited to share my learning with you this year.
This is amazing because:I love to dance too and my favourite food is nachos as well.
ReplyDeleteDid you know I love to dance too and my favourite food is nachos as well.
Next time, you could use so more similes .
Why did you write about you?
my favorite food is nachos Charlotte!
DeleteThis is amazing because you shared your personality and I like that you did lots of description.
ReplyDeleteDid you know I love dance and netball as well !
Next time you should post about something different or something that no one else has done.
Why did you…choose to post and write all about you?
This is amazing because you described yourself really well.also love dancing too.
ReplyDeleteDid you know I like also writing as well.I like the fact how you added your learning goals.
Next time, you could add some more similes.
Why did you…write about that on your blog?
This is amazing because I do dance too.
ReplyDeleteDid you know I like the fact that added some of your learning goals.
Next time, you could add some more similes.
Why did you… choose to post that in your blog ?
I like how you say lots about you. It’s a good piece of writing.
ReplyDeleteI like netball as well.
Next time, you could try and use more words to describe your pets.
Why did you choose to write about you??
This is amazing because it really shows me who you are.
ReplyDeleteDid you know I like Ed Sheeran too?
Next time, you could add more punctuation,
Why did you choose to write about yourself?